I love the dynamic of this one. The way that the panels link up and the voices move around the page. I also think that the hologram effect was a good call- it looks fantastic.
You'll probably be too busy to do more for ages, but I think you should.
The hologram effect was Quoth's suggestion. The double-page spread situation arose from having too much to exposit on one page. Ah well. I've got a few more in hand so I'll post another one soon. Or will I?!
Hmm. Loved it, except the powers-being-passed-onto-the-son thing. I always hate that as a plot device in any story, though, and for complicated reasons I shan't post here because it's really more of a rant (a rant? me? Shocking.) Otherwise brilliant advancement of the story, though, and doesn't the hologram look good? Good work.
Fair comment re: powers passing to son, fun and games. The next page is the last we'll be hearing of that plotline. I plotted this story in march and it has barely changed. C'est la vie.
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I love the dynamic of this one. The way that the panels link up and the voices move around the page. I also think that the hologram effect was a good call- it looks fantastic.
You'll probably be too busy to do more for ages, but I think you should.
The hologram effect was Quoth's suggestion. The double-page spread situation arose from having too much to exposit on one page. Ah well. I've got a few more in hand so I'll post another one soon. Or will I?!
OMEGA LOOKS LIKE IRON MAN!!!!!
(Happiness is me.)
Hmm. Loved it, except the powers-being-passed-onto-the-son thing. I always hate that as a plot device in any story, though, and for complicated reasons I shan't post here because it's really more of a rant (a rant? me? Shocking.) Otherwise brilliant advancement of the story, though, and doesn't the hologram look good? Good work.
Also: Omega looks like Iron Man.
Fair comment re: powers passing to son, fun and games. The next page is the last we'll be hearing of that plotline. I plotted this story in march and it has barely changed. C'est la vie.
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