Thursday 30 October 2008

Carnival: Who Killed the Praetorian? - Part Nine

4 comments:

Jester said...

I love the dynamic of this one. The way that the panels link up and the voices move around the page. I also think that the hologram effect was a good call- it looks fantastic.

You'll probably be too busy to do more for ages, but I think you should.

Jom said...

The hologram effect was Quoth's suggestion. The double-page spread situation arose from having too much to exposit on one page. Ah well. I've got a few more in hand so I'll post another one soon. Or will I?!

Quoth the Raven said...

OMEGA LOOKS LIKE IRON MAN!!!!!

(Happiness is me.)

Hmm. Loved it, except the powers-being-passed-onto-the-son thing. I always hate that as a plot device in any story, though, and for complicated reasons I shan't post here because it's really more of a rant (a rant? me? Shocking.) Otherwise brilliant advancement of the story, though, and doesn't the hologram look good? Good work.

Also: Omega looks like Iron Man.

Jom said...

Fair comment re: powers passing to son, fun and games. The next page is the last we'll be hearing of that plotline. I plotted this story in march and it has barely changed. C'est la vie.